Mojave Music's Drabbles Thread

Salix Babylonika · 2013-03-05 20:56:36

Long story short, I write sometimes and decided to make a thread for it.

I'll repost the other ones if I can ever weed them out of the mess that is my tumblr

but here's the most recent

Viani · 2013-03-05 20:57:49

Who is super lazuli?

Salix Babylonika · 2013-03-05 20:58:34

no idea what ya mean, sister.

Yarrun XIX · 2013-03-05 22:23:11

Intro sentence was a bit muddy. Best to cut it up into smaller sentences; easier to get your point across that way.

8.5/10, would read more.

Fossilmaiden · 2013-03-05 22:29:54

I feel like I should point out that that's more a vignette, than a drabble. Drabbles are of exactly 100 words.

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