Scenes

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  • Move-in day!

    It's a sunny day.  There is a bit of a hot, stale air that pervades the rooms, but there is a feeling of hope and optimism.  A little bit of dusting and wiping, and boxes are ready to be opened, and the clutter is ready to be changed into something functional.

    An optimistic C major theme reflects the optimistic mood and the midday sunshine that beams in.  Carrying stuff into the building is sweaty but rewarding work, because it gives way to a

    What starts as a barren room with but a desk, a bookcase, a chair, a bed, and a closet, begins to teem with character, as the desk is adorned by books and pens and pencils and stationery and a computer, the bookcase becomes occupied by books, the chair's back now hangs a backpack, the bed gains sheets atop it and sundry supplies beneath it, and the closet is filled with clothes and shoes.  And of course the window still streams in sunlight.

    These walls -- some concrete, some drywall, all painted white -- might be filled with posters at some point.  This desk might be adorned with photographs later.  But for now, they can wait.

    Wandering the halls reveals one room that's richly adorned in all matching colors.  A bit on the tacky side, but certainly stylish.  Questionably practical though.  Another room has a remarkably complex and well-designed loft created from wooden beams likely purchased from a local hardware store...or a past occupant.  That puts the bed up high, making lots of room...but is it a good idea to put the desk down there, blocking light from the fluorescent lamp on the ceiling or daylight from the window?
  • edited 2016-09-01 00:29:27
    As I sit on the sofa in this room, with the lights off, the lights from a neighboring room weakly illuminate a few things.  The last thing I see before going to sleep is usually not darkness in my room with bits of light from the outside; I'm usually the sole island of light left in the house by the time I turn in.

    It's 8 PM.  I'm going to sleep soon.  So soon after dinner, because I've got a long day tomorrow.  I've got my alarm set for, like 5 AM to catch that early morning flight.  It'll be the dawn of a new day, literally and figuratively.

    I don't usually go to sleep this early.  It feels weird to do so.  I'm not sure whether it's the anticipation or the fact that I'm not tired yet.  Maybe it's both.  But it's definitely a rare but familiar feeling, that anticipation.

    A multitude of unanswered questions cross my mind.  What will this new job be like?  Where will it take me?  Can I succeed or will I fail?  Far away from home, how well can I survive?

    I can but attempt to comfort myself with a divine sense of assurance that everything will be all right.

    It won't make these questions any easier to answer.  But perhaps it may bring me peace for now.  After all, tomorrow will be a new day.
  • a quiet rain
    at midnight falls
    the cooling drops
    on cheek they strike
    a stillness shown
    by rain and shade
    with water paint
    and freeze the state
    of world so loud

    no voice is heard
    of course, it's late
    and wet and no
    one bathes in rain
    but silence speaks
    the raindrops' tap
    and stops and takes
    one from one's track

    where does all go?
    the rain that falls
    we shield ourselves
    to push away
    but as we act
    we suffer thirst
    where was that rain
    that we so spurned?

    the rain and night
    some see as sad
    and sunny days
    are happy ones
    but integral
    a part of life
    a part of us
    both night and rain
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